Dreams ~*~Awarded~*~
She sits down on the pier A tear runs down her cheek She looks out across the ocean and ponders about her dreams How the ocean and night sky are so bright The world calls out to her The sounds of the...
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She looks out across the ocean and ponders about her dreams Your very poignant words move me, Jackie. I can picture this scene all too well....great writing.
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Ah, I really enjoyed this one, of course. Great visual and verbal pictures here. Very nice. Yours, Terry
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Rick and terry I am glad you liked this poem, So many dreams to ponder on and not enough courage to reach those dreams.......... Jackie
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Dreams and tears can share the same stage when reality interferes *sigh* Deeply felt Jackie... ***Clapping*** Bri~
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Loved the visuals and the feelings spilled here... **Hugs** Debb
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Jackie ~ I think this is my favorite of yours so far. The repetition works extremely well and your finale is strong and resounding... The sounds of the ocean and night sky seem so far as her dreams
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The loneliness is so palpable Rosebud I felt lonely with her. A grand read this morning
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The sounds of the ocean and night call out to her Follow your dreams A tear runs down her cheek and falls on the pier Never give up on dreams they are the things keeping us going....Got talent? I know...
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Snapper, Bri, Midnightsongs, Cusick, Uncafesta, I am glad you liked my dreams poem and I am grateful you took the time to read and comment on it. Cherri, Thank you and I am honored that you gave my...
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((((~Jackie~))))) Congratulations on your much deserved award, lovely lady.....dreams are the breath of our souls, and sometimes, the aftermath of life's consequences and storms can sway them into a...
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This is beautiful and has a longing about it. Written very clearly and well expressed. Love this one Rose and congrats!
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A very enjoyable read. Congrad's on the well deserved award. Joe
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